Thursday, September 17, 2009

55 Flash Fiction Friday - 9/17/09

Each week G-Man of 55 Flash Fiction Friday challenges us to write coherently using only 55 words. I usually am late posting mine. This week I am early. Give it a try. It is fun.


The crime scene was a quiet, suburban, cul-de-sac.
“Unprofessional robbery homicide, no forced entry.”
“ Two suspects, deceased’s 16-year-old granddaughter and boyfriend.”
“They will be holed up; sex, drugs, Playstation.”
A woman enters, who might have been beautiful had she not tried so hard to be.
“My daughter doesn’t play video games officer.”
Wizened eyes rolled.
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3 comments:

  1. G-ManSeptember 17, 2009 at 6:28 PM

    hahahaha
    You are an upbeat fella aren't you?
    But I will say this...
    Excellent 55!!
    Top notch writing son. Thanks for visiting, thanks for playing, and have a Kick-Ass Week-End!!

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  2. Monkey ManSeptember 17, 2009 at 8:38 PM

    Like the detective novel style on you 55. They're fun aren't they. A good way to see what other writers are up to as well.

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  3. Dr.JohnSeptember 18, 2009 at 8:31 AM

    Sex and drugs but no video games.
    Makes you think.
    Good 55

    Mine is posted

    HERE.

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