Thursday, November 5, 2009

55 Flash Fiction Friday - "Hesitation" - 11/6/09

My Facebook friend, Lena, once again provided my prompt for G-Man's 55 Flash Fiction Friday. This week's prompt is hesitation.

At first it was barely noticeable.
A slight hesitation.
An uncertainty.
A moment of confusion.
He kept it to himself but knew that soon it would be obvious to everyone.
Worry furrowed his brow as he dressed for work.
He walked down the tunnel toward the symphony of zealots cheering the name on his back.
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8 comments:

  1. g-manNovember 5, 2009 at 10:00 PM

    Cheering AND Jeering Rick...
    Awesome 55!!
    You don't see too many Sport themed entries ...Thanks
    Excellent Flash this Friday, and have a Kick-Ass Week-End....G

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  2. myrtle beached whaleNovember 5, 2009 at 10:03 PM

    I try to mix it up a bit. Sometimes I get a little dark.

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  3. orionsbowNovember 5, 2009 at 10:37 PM

    Man, amazing. Just amazing. I thought you were gonna rag on him and say he forgot to zip his uniform, 'cause that's what it looks like, but, again, perfection!

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  4. Brian MillerNovember 6, 2009 at 3:37 AM

    great 55. why is it we dont want to believe it is over? playing well passed our prime...

    mine is up.

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  5. Hootin AnniNovember 6, 2009 at 3:40 AM

    Excellent....I still LIKE Brett.

    Mine is Pepper Sprayed today. Click Here and scroll down beyond my Friday's Show n Tell to find my 55. Have a glorious weekend.

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  6. Dr.JohnNovember 6, 2009 at 4:58 AM

    Great 55 . It made me smile. Poor guy just wanted to make another million bucks.
    Great 55
    I have finished my 55.
    You’ll find it

    HERE.

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  7. bht805November 6, 2009 at 5:29 AM

    Well done

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  8. ForgetfuloneNovember 7, 2009 at 9:27 PM

    Excellent post! Always enjoy your writing.

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