Thursday, June 11, 2009

55 Flash Fiction Friday - 6/11/09

Each week G-Man of 55 Flash Fiction Friday challenges us to write a piece using only 55 words.

A soulless beauty. Perfect combination of soft and firm. He realized he didn’t have the assets to keep her interested. No surprise she is ending it. She still wants to be friends. He considers that option. She possesses no qualities that he values in a friend. He passes. He watches her sway away. No regrets.

9 comments:

G-Man said...

Well...She must have had some ASSets..hehehehe
Excellent 55 MBW!!
I'm glad you are back to sharing your very creative mind with us again.
Thanks for playing, and have a Great Week-End...G

Dr.John said...

A short horror story. Put the best face on it when she dumps you. Exit with some pride. Deny her the friendship crap. All that in 55.
Great writing.

Hootin' Anni said...

Well, I must say that the image used is fitting...but then again, if there aren't regrets HE could be seeing HER that way too.

Mine's posted

Mona said...

what a 'Doll'

Perfect for display window!

Fandango said...

Tell us where she is and we will eat her. She shouldn't treat him like that.
Good 55
Ours is ready to be read.

jadey said...

Hey there,

Great 55 some things are best when all strings are cut. Her loss. Have a great weekend. My 55 is up

Mama Zen said...

Very cool. Love the picture!

linda may said...

Goodness me! You are such a cynic sometimes. Maybe you are like me after all.
Love ya!

sundaycynce said...

Really terrific 55. Much more comprehensive than i would have believed it could be. I can hardly do comments in 55. Very entertaining and delightfully illustrated.