I hadn't written one of these in a while. The challenge here is to tell a story using only 55 words. Try it. It is not as easy as it sounds. This one is about a guy we all know.
The club was emptying. Women that caught his eye were paired with someone. As the cliché promised, his hesitation had caused him to lose. Even through beer goggles, she was substandard, but, any port in a storm. He approached her confidently. “How would you like to dance?” She sized him up, “No thanks” she sneered. 
Friday, July 18, 2008
55 Flash Fiction Friday - Ladies Man - 7/18/08
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9 comments:
Dang MBW...
Thats almost sad.
But Whatever...Great 55!!
Loved the accompaning pic...
Thanks for visiting, Thanks for playing, and have a GREAT week-end.
Galen
ha ha lmao always some cheesy dude like that out there. i read the post about your friend...very nice. and sorry to hear about your dad's friend. like you said, he had a great run :)
Pride & Prejudice?
Sad and difficult situation tch tch !
Excellent 55ve!
Oh yes, we all know one of THOSE! Nice job.
very witty, would love to see you with a mullet, lol
hey You're back!! glad to see you blogging.hope you're doing well.
very funny pics and story! reminded me of the 'two wild and crazy guys' skit!
(btw... what's up with that captions game?
I am waiting to see what the winning caption was and they never post it.)
OMG- this is so good, I love it! 55 words, huh? No easy task, and you've got it nailed. I can picture this man in my mind right now....I'm making a quick exit!
Bella:)
Clever, I think you told the story eloquently...poor guy. :)
If you decide to write another story about me, you have my permission to use my name if you'd like.
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