Each week G-Man of 55 Flash Fiction Friday challenges us to write coherently using only 55 words. I usually am late posting mine. This week I am early. Give it a try. It is fun.
The crime scene was a quiet, suburban, cul-de-sac.
“Unprofessional robbery homicide, no forced entry.”
“ Two suspects, deceased’s 16-year-old granddaughter and boyfriend.”
“They will be holed up; sex, drugs, Playstation.”
A woman enters, who might have been beautiful had she not tried so hard to be.
“My daughter doesn’t play video games officer.”
Wizened eyes rolled.
Thursday, September 17, 2009
55 Flash Fiction Friday - 9/17/09
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3 comments:
hahahaha
You are an upbeat fella aren't you?
But I will say this...
Excellent 55!!
Top notch writing son. Thanks for visiting, thanks for playing, and have a Kick-Ass Week-End!!
Like the detective novel style on you 55. They're fun aren't they. A good way to see what other writers are up to as well.
Sex and drugs but no video games.
Makes you think.
Good 55
Mine is posted
HERE.
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