Each week G-Man of 55 Flash Fiction Friday challenges us to tell a story using only 55 words. I highly recommend it.
They met online
Lived close by
Traded lies
And someone else’s photos
Innocent chat became suggestion
Innuendo became Cyber sex
Both were married
Without joy
Meeting planned
Discreet little bar
He got there early
Eyes adjusted to dark
Surveyed the scene hopefully
One recognizable woman
Too familiar
Oh No!!!!
What was his sister doing here?
Thursday, September 24, 2009
55 Flash Fiction Friday - The Rendezvous - 9/24/09
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16 comments:
Bingo!
Yes, you must be very careful not to lie too much! Could be very dangerous...:D Great 55!
Well...? What state? It may be OK!
A cyber twist of The Pina Colada Song eh? hehehehe
Excellent 55 Son!!
Two straight weeks too...Yay!!!
Have a Kick-Ass Week-End Brother..
G
Cyberspace is scary! Great 55!jeNN
Brilliant!
Great 55 ~ and I'm afraid, probably all too true.
Take a gander at my 55 for the week.
Ciao,
Chef Kar
I loved it because I love stories with a twist
Mine is posted
HERE.
that sucks!!! great 55 though!!
Ewwww!
Good one!
excellent 55! how true that is!
This is a little too close to my own reality. Good 55 topic though, and hopefully a warning! Welcome to the crazy group of 55vers :o)
Something I hadn't considered in all the pitfalls of cyberspace...Eeeeek!
This probably happens more often than we realize! I actually did meet my husband on the Internet. I knew he was sending me a real photo because it was not very flattering. This was in 2001, and we've been married a little over 4 years now. It's probably no worse than meeting in a bar. Maybe better? But, I got lucky and met an honest person.
Hah! That gave me a good laugh on a day when I really needed one. Thanks!
Whale: Okay, so this time you didn't use one of my photographs...however I do object to the cartoon depiction...even though it is actually a good likeness. HA
Too funny!!!! or nightmarish. What a fricken disappointment that would be huh....getting up the nerve, excitment and apprehension running through your mine and then..... BOOM! clo
Very hilarious!
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