Thursday, September 24, 2009

55 Flash Fiction Friday - The Rendezvous - 9/24/09

Each week G-Man of 55 Flash Fiction Friday challenges us to tell a story using only 55 words. I highly recommend it.

They met online
Lived close by
Traded lies
And someone else’s photos
Innocent chat became suggestion
Innuendo became Cyber sex
Both were married
Without joy
Meeting planned
Discreet little bar
He got there early
Eyes adjusted to dark
Surveyed the scene hopefully
One recognizable woman
Too familiar
Oh No!!!!
What was his sister doing here?

17 comments:

Lulda Casadaga said...

Bingo!
Yes, you must be very careful not to lie too much! Could be very dangerous...:D Great 55!

G-Man said...

Well...? What state? It may be OK!
A cyber twist of The Pina Colada Song eh? hehehehe
Excellent 55 Son!!
Two straight weeks too...Yay!!!
Have a Kick-Ass Week-End Brother..
G

big Jenn said...

Cyberspace is scary! Great 55!jeNN

Kathleen said...

Brilliant!

Chef Kar said...

Great 55 ~ and I'm afraid, probably all too true.

Take a gander at my 55 for the week.

Ciao,

Chef Kar

Dr.John said...

I loved it because I love stories with a twist
Mine is posted

HERE.

jabblog said...

Hilarious!

clean and crazy said...

that sucks!!! great 55 though!!

Mama Zen said...

Ewwww!

Good one!

Cat said...

excellent 55! how true that is!

Tall Kay said...

This is a little too close to my own reality. Good 55 topic though, and hopefully a warning! Welcome to the crazy group of 55vers :o)

Eaton Bennett said...

Something I hadn't considered in all the pitfalls of cyberspace...Eeeeek!

forgetfulone said...

This probably happens more often than we realize! I actually did meet my husband on the Internet. I knew he was sending me a real photo because it was not very flattering. This was in 2001, and we've been married a little over 4 years now. It's probably no worse than meeting in a bar. Maybe better? But, I got lucky and met an honest person.

Regina said...

Hah! That gave me a good laugh on a day when I really needed one. Thanks!

Go Figure said...

Whale: Okay, so this time you didn't use one of my photographs...however I do object to the cartoon depiction...even though it is actually a good likeness. HA

Anonymous said...

Too funny!!!! or nightmarish. What a fricken disappointment that would be huh....getting up the nerve, excitment and apprehension running through your mine and then..... BOOM! clo

inlandempiregirl said...

Very hilarious!