Thursday, November 5, 2009

55 Flash Fiction Friday - "Hesitation" - 11/6/09

My Facebook friend, Lena, once again provided my prompt for G-Man's 55 Flash Fiction Friday. This week's prompt is hesitation.

At first it was barely noticeable.
A slight hesitation.
An uncertainty.
A moment of confusion.
He kept it to himself but knew that soon it would be obvious to everyone.
Worry furrowed his brow as he dressed for work.
He walked down the tunnel toward the symphony of zealots cheering the name on his back.


g-man said...

Cheering AND Jeering Rick...
Awesome 55!!
You don't see too many Sport themed entries ...Thanks
Excellent Flash this Friday, and have a Kick-Ass Week-End....G

myrtle beached whale said...

I try to mix it up a bit. Sometimes I get a little dark.

orionsbow said...

Man, amazing. Just amazing. I thought you were gonna rag on him and say he forgot to zip his uniform, 'cause that's what it looks like, but, again, perfection!

Brian Miller said...

great 55. why is it we dont want to believe it is over? playing well passed our prime...

mine is up.

Hootin' Anni said...

Excellent....I still LIKE Brett.

Mine is Pepper Sprayed today. Click Here and scroll down beyond my Friday's Show n Tell to find my 55. Have a glorious weekend.

Dr.John said...

Great 55 . It made me smile. Poor guy just wanted to make another million bucks.
Great 55
I have finished my 55.
You’ll find it


bht805 said...

Well done

Forgetfulone said...

Excellent post! Always enjoy your writing.